I just wanted to let everyone who has been enjoying the story that going forward I may not be able to pump out as much as I did last week. I will try to at least get one chapter up every other week, if not sooner. Right now, I’m adding to Chapter 3 as I felt it ended a bit abruptly. After that, I’ll move on to Chapter 4. I’ve got some great plans-I think they’ll be worth the wait.
Update: The addition to Chapter 3 is complete and posted!
Sorry for the wait. It’s been a rollercoaster ride for me the last few weeks. However, I wanted to make sure I got this done tonight, so I’m happy to tell you that Chapter 5 of BPOTD is now posted!
Chapter 7 is now posted both here and at FanFiction.net. Enjoy!
BTW, I will be going back and revising some of the early chapters. I attended a “Fan Fiction 101” panel at Tokyo In Tulsa this summer and it gave me some ideas of how to expand my early chapters. Watch for alerts!
UPDATE: The third draft of Chapter 1a is now posted.
I liked your improvements to 1a and I just finished chapter 5. I really enjoyed it. The story continues to be exciting and I like how each chapter ends. Now I just need to catch up on the rest!
Thank you, Wicca! I hope you (and everyone else) enjoy the expansion of the story as much as I’m enjoying writing it. Here’s the third draft of chapter 1b for your reading enjoyment.
I’m loving Kenny and Aoi Newshawk. Great story and characters personalities and storylines are really compelling. I’m curious about what you are up to with Onodera. But the bell thing was genius. I was anxious the whole time I was reading it. Can’t wait to see what happens next. :ohmy:
I just posted the third draft of chapter 1d, as well as making some detail changes and corrections to chapters 1a, 1b and 1c. I’m working on the third draft of 1c and 1e as well as chapter 8. I hope to have them up soon.
My Christmas gift to all my BPOTD fans-Chapter 9 is now posted at FanFiction.net! I’ve also completed and uploaded 4th draft revisions for all of the “first” chapters. Please give it a read if you could and leave a review if you like what you’ve read.
I managed to complete Chapter 10 last night so I’ve posted it to FanFiction.net. I lost my personal web space last month-Cox stopped providing it! I may have a way to post it on a self-made website since I moved my wife Holly’s site, www.hollysheart.com, to Lunarpages. I can host other websites there. Now I just need a domain name.