FoamyFreak's Poems


#1

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#2

Yay! You’re back! :laugh:

This sounds like something that could be set to music… if I were more musically inclined, I could probably hear it in my head.

It reminds me of my college days a little (and yes, I can remember that far back!).

I hope you can find some of those other ones from the old forum, since everything has been lost from then. :angry:

Great to have you back, Foamy!


#3

I actually wrote it with the intentions of making it into a song… lol I know in my head how I want it to be sung but sadly I am a drummer with no vocal talents… :stuck_out_tongue:

Of course you can remember them! Your not that old yet! lol

I believe they’re at my house somewhere… So once I go back I can get them… And if they aren’t there I know my ex-girlfriend has a binder with all of them in it that I could probably borrow or get off of her… All in due time!

Thanks for the comment! :slight_smile:


#4

A guy writing poetry. THAT’S what TAN was missing! It really balances out some of the other -cough- happenings around here. -glares in dragonrider_cody’s general direction-


#5

Hahaha :stuck_out_tongue: I guess I shouldn’t of left!! I would’ve been here all along!! lol And I don’t see nearly as many stories or poetry on here as there used to be…


#6

And if you want a, how shall I say, creative writing outlet, there’s always As The Mecha Turns. It’s… it’s really something.


#7

Lol what do you mean? What exactly is it??


#8

It is our very own soap opera! It’s great!


#9

PretearHimeno wrote:

Why do you always pick on me?

Besides, I think Mecha is very well balanced. There’s a little romance, a bit of comedy, some action, and a few zombies thrown in for good measure. I think you’re just mad because I don’t put in enough vampire smut for your tastes…

And by the way, nice poem Foamy!


#10

Hahaha I really don’t know if that’s my type of reading… I honestly hate to read :stuck_out_tongue: But I do like to write… And thanks!! :slight_smile: I’ll be posting a new one up shortly… Idk if its as good as that one, but its decent. Definitely shorter…
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New poems up! Hope you like it!**[/size]


#11

You have such beautiful memories of your past relationship - much better than I have of my past relationships. That’s such a good thing.

My favorite lines:

[quote]Forever is never broken,
When past love fills my eyes…

Friendship everlasting,
I wish for you to know…[/quote]

You also have such a gift of words, keep that close to you. Always. :slight_smile:


#12

Lol yea… We were together for 3 and a half years, so trust me there’s plenty of bad memories! But I just don’t focus on those anymore :stuck_out_tongue: She was my only relationship that truly meant everything to me…

My favorite part, by far, is the ending! :slight_smile:

Lol thanks! I shall try. Hasn’t left me with 3-4 years of not writing so I’ll hopefully de-rustify my skills and get better soon enough!


#13

-in creepy child’s voice- Come play with us Danny.


#14

Uh… what? lol


#15

Was wondering happened to you! Great to see more works around here.


#16

I got preoccupied with other stuff… lol. I’ll try to keep on getting them up for everyone… And sorry, but I honestly don’t think I remember you fillet… Just nothing comes to mind when I think of the name… :stuck_out_tongue:


#17

It’s… a Shining reference. =/


#18

Lol I realize that :stuck_out_tongue: But where did it come from? haha


#19

It’s a reference to the whole “getting you to join Mecha” thing.


#20

Oooooooooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh… Haha I get it now lol I was a little slow on that one…